♥Rachel♥’s Reviews > A Flicker in the Dark > Status Update
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Over-descriptive writing is slowing the pace down. I’m having to up the speed of the narration to the important parts of the plot…
— Jan 10, 2022 07:56AM
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Jan 12, 2022 05:16PM
Good luck, Rachel. Hope the speed up helps.
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Laura wrote: "Good luck, Rachel. Hope the speed up helps."Thanks! It did!
