Maryann Breedlove’s Reviews > Onio > Status Update

I'm hooked! I'm amazed at the use of descriptions! I must mention "The mountain shrugged" brilliant imagery! The description of the fall through the landing at the bottom of the cliff, I felt fear, saw the scene from above and felt the triumph; my tummy did the strange flips reserved for rollercoasters. I have a feeling the novel will be like presidential speech. I'll be pausing every few sentences so I can applaud.