Pheonix Fanfiction’s Reviews > Jessica and Sharon > Status Update

I loved these! Loved getting more of an insight into Jonathan! Can't wait to start the next book! <3

But if she loved me through it, couldn’t someone else? Couldn’t someone else keep a secret or ten?
I love that he's thinking this and thinking of Monica! <3 Jonathan sooo much!

That meant moving Rachel, touching base with each sister,
Who's Rachel if she's not a sister?!?

“You know Debbie. She won’t rest until everyone’s happily coupled off but her.”
Haha I love Debbie too! <3

Is she short? Tall? How old?” There is nothing like a woman’s curiosity about other women. She’d never imply or even admit to herself she felt an ounce of competition between herself and Monica, yet she had to know so she could compare herself and decide if she was okay with it.
I really like Sharon - I hope we get to see more of her! :)

I texted Monica a few times, just a couple of pokes to let her know I wasn’t running off and to let myself know I was really doing it.
Awww! Cute!

I wish we could go back to the way we were,” she said. “I don’t.”
Finally! <3

Did she feel this way when I’d gotten on my knees and begged her to stay? I’d been such a mess of tears I couldn’t remember her expression. God, I’d never do that again.
Oh! Poor Jonathan! :'(

I got up. I owed her honesty, at least, after everything we’d been through, after all I’d promised her, after all the times we’d hurt each other. “It’s too late. I’m sorry. I’m not the same man.”
Glad you realized but seriously could you not have realized 10 minutes earlier- when you were back outside!

I looked into her eyes. Fire, and pride. Not an ounce of fear. What was going on with that gaze was ten times more interesting than the curves of her body.
<3 I love seeing into Jonathan's head when they met! <3