Khandi Tumeo’s Reviews > Act of Defiance > Status Update
Khandi Tumeo
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Editing mistakes, hook isn't as quick as your other stories. Just starting to draw me into it.
— Jun 07, 2014 02:44PM
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Khandi Tumeo
is 62% done
Oh please, please let me read and edit for you!! There are SO MANY types of mistakes from spelling, punctuation and grammar! A beautiful story but the mistakes detract from it.
— Jun 07, 2014 06:22PM

