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The water, she saw, was churning.
Abruptly, she felt the rumble beneath her feet.
Before she could whirl and race back, something broke the surface of the water and shot upward in a flying arch. She'd already sucked her breath in to scream when it clicked in her mind that it was one of the Hirachi, though he was too far away for her to recognize him. He hit the water nearly on top of a second Hirachi.
— Jun 09, 2014 11:00AM
Abruptly, she felt the rumble beneath her feet.
Before she could whirl and race back, something broke the surface of the water and shot upward in a flying arch. She'd already sucked her breath in to scream when it clicked in her mind that it was one of the Hirachi, though he was too far away for her to recognize him. He hit the water nearly on top of a second Hirachi.
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“Wild woman,” he murmured with a mixture of teasing amusement and censure when he leaned away and captured her face with one hand, adding firmly, “No more trying to battle beasts twice as big as you are."
"You'll have to tell them not to be fighting me for berries,” she retorted dryly.
— Jun 09, 2014 12:31PM
"You'll have to tell them not to be fighting me for berries,” she retorted dryly.
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Uttering a snarl of rage, Khan slammed his elbow backwards into Teron. Teron's arms pin-wheeled in an effort to regain his balance and then he disappeared over the side again.
Miranda's jaw dropped.
Khan met her gaze, his own piercing. His expression, even at the distance that separated them, unnerved her. He smiled abruptly.
Actually, it was a lot closer to a feral grin.
— Jun 09, 2014 11:05AM
Miranda's jaw dropped.
Khan met her gaze, his own piercing. His expression, even at the distance that separated them, unnerved her. He smiled abruptly.
Actually, it was a lot closer to a feral grin.
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A wet splat behind her caught her attention and she halted, turning to look.
Khan had landed on the top of the wall where she'd been standing moments before.
She stared at him blankly, her mind scrambling to figure out how he'd managed to get from the surface of the water to the top of the wall that quickly. Even as she stared, however, another man shot up from the sea and landed almost on his heels.
Teron.
— Jun 09, 2014 11:04AM
Khan had landed on the top of the wall where she'd been standing moments before.
She stared at him blankly, her mind scrambling to figure out how he'd managed to get from the surface of the water to the top of the wall that quickly. Even as she stared, however, another man shot up from the sea and landed almost on his heels.
Teron.
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The moment she realized that, she discovered that she could see dozens of others fighting just beneath the surface. That was what had the water churning, the battle in progress between the Hirachi.
— Jun 09, 2014 11:01AM
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Deborah shrugged. “Two could scream louder than one. I could help you run. And, if it looks like its going to get us, I could just leave you as bait and make my getaway."
— Jun 08, 2014 10:07PM
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Deborah pushed away from her abruptly and stared at her in horror for a moment, glanced uneasily at Khan and then extricated herself from Miranda and moved a away with the air of ‘I'm not with her. I don't know her'.
— Jun 08, 2014 09:58PM
