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Adam Gulledge
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Not that impressed with the prose so far.
The first few pages left me asking why there were such long sentences during tense moments; shorter and snappier prose would get the point across better. The time spent in the father's old house, so far, also didn't draw any feelings for Charlotte.
— Jan 31, 2022 07:58PM
The first few pages left me asking why there were such long sentences during tense moments; shorter and snappier prose would get the point across better. The time spent in the father's old house, so far, also didn't draw any feelings for Charlotte.
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Adam Gulledge
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More references to stuff in the games.
And something that's of pretty significant importance to Charlotte.
— Feb 01, 2022 06:34AM
And something that's of pretty significant importance to Charlotte.
