Status Update

Tamela is 89% done

Too many details on insignificant matters, lack of scene development...this joint was thrown together with no rhythm, rhyme or reason. Misspelled words, present and past tense in the same sentence causes the scenes to be disjointed...she been in the game too long for this. My advice would be for Keisha to concentrate on a couple of writing workshops and less on designer grabs and labels. Label overkill...fa real!!

— Jun 14, 2014 05:53AM