Cacauli’s Reviews > Elian > Status Update
Cacauli
is 99% done
yes, there's been definitely some progress since Tate Pack (finally an editor on the case), but still the same issues of "make it up as you go along", "let's describe what they're wearing" and "if you don't have a clue how to solve the plot, stall". And the names... Carrington. Really?! Nevin JUNIOR!? Why do I keep doing it myself...
— Jun 17, 2014 03:05PM
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Cacauli
is 45% done
I swear I will get a bruise for the amount of facepalm I have been doing with this book o.O
— Jun 17, 2014 08:34AM
Cacauli
is 22% done
_"he wanted to scream, to tell he was there, to choose him, pick him, anyone"... wasn't this a line from one of "mated at midnight"? The one with the twin unicorns?
— Jun 15, 2014 01:14PM
Cacauli
is starting
This is me giving Vicktor Alexander another chance. I can only hope there have been significant improvements since Tate Pack (oh please pretty please).
— Jun 15, 2014 01:07PM
