Joan’s Reviews > Starting Over at Primrose Woods > Status Update

i know this is romantic comedy, but my word, I can't cope any longer with the sheer number of adjectives littering the pages. Long, long sentences that go on and on and on and on about more or less the same thing. I like my writing sparse and clean and pure. I'm not saying there's anything wrong with the writing here, but its like candy floss - all froth and no substance when you get down to the nitty-gritty.