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is 40% done
I really wish there was more dialogue. It would just lighten up the book and make the characters feel more real for me. =\
— Jun 26, 2014 03:24PM
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pinK
is 44% done
The part in Coll's POV kinda threw me off. The fact that it was in all italics was confusing because I wasn't able to tell what was narrative and what was thought. =(
— Jun 26, 2014 04:48PM
