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Josh Hedgepeth
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#6 Snow Metal
I entered this close to DNFing the connection because I'm largely struggling to connect. Ultimately, I liked this story, but like the others it felt plucked from a larger more complete narrative. 3-3.5 stars
#7 A Maji Mahi Chronicle
This is the first story I really really liked. It was not as abridged as many, but it did feel like there was more to the world worth telling. 4-4.5 stars
— Feb 16, 2022 08:20PM
I entered this close to DNFing the connection because I'm largely struggling to connect. Ultimately, I liked this story, but like the others it felt plucked from a larger more complete narrative. 3-3.5 stars
#7 A Maji Mahi Chronicle
This is the first story I really really liked. It was not as abridged as many, but it did feel like there was more to the world worth telling. 4-4.5 stars
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Josh Hedgepeth
is 24% done
#4 the one who sees
And #5 beatitudes
Both 3.5. A bit more focus from me and I'm feeling a little more immersed. I thought I might have a 4 star here, especially #5 but I wasn't a fan of the ultimate direction
— Feb 14, 2022 08:28PM
And #5 beatitudes
Both 3.5. A bit more focus from me and I'm feeling a little more immersed. I thought I might have a 4 star here, especially #5 but I wasn't a fan of the ultimate direction
Josh Hedgepeth
is 15% done
#3 a nursery rhyme
Another intriguing story in a unique and well constructed world but one that feels like the making of a bigger story. It felt like I was thrust into the climax of a bigger story that I had no investment in. 3/5
— Feb 14, 2022 07:54PM
Another intriguing story in a unique and well constructed world but one that feels like the making of a bigger story. It felt like I was thrust into the climax of a bigger story that I had no investment in. 3/5
Josh Hedgepeth
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#2 Swimming with Daddy.
An easier to follow story but one that didn't strike much of a cord. 3/5
— Feb 13, 2022 07:41PM
An easier to follow story but one that didn't strike much of a cord. 3/5
Josh Hedgepeth
is 7% done
The first story is intriguing and very weird and surreal. Its a strong start, the titular story by which the collection is named by. But so much weirdness is such a small package is hard to do without leaving the reader wanting. The confusion will dominate my memory of this story more than the story itself sadly. 3.5/5 star.
— Feb 13, 2022 07:27PM
