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Stephen
is 40% done
The romance component of this story is too forced and over the top. The drama otherwise is pretty interesting.
— Jun 29, 2014 11:55AM
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Stephen
is 93% done
Suddenly, so much is clear and motivations are revealed. A little late in the story for my taste.
— Jul 18, 2014 09:16AM
Stephen
is 90% done
I am now very glad that I stuck it out. There is an actual plot with real stuff happening now.
— Jul 18, 2014 07:36AM
Stephen
is 85% done
Sweet! This is the kind of action, drama, and other good stuff I have been waiting for. Too bad the whole book is coming to an end. I wish there had been less insta-love and gushing teen crush...and more of THIS.
— Jul 17, 2014 04:00PM
Stephen
is 82% done
Awesome! Here I am nearing the end...and the actual conflict...the plot I though was totally missing...finally shows up.
— Jul 17, 2014 02:24PM
Stephen
is 80% done
And the elusive villains have finally returned from their nearly 100 page hiatus.
— Jul 17, 2014 01:43PM
Stephen
is 78% done
Listen here you heathens! No divorce! If you break the vows...genital mutilation for you!
— Jul 17, 2014 12:45PM
Stephen
is 76% done
I seriously wish the plot didn't decay into over-done romance cliché. I would love to get more of the future politics, technology, characters. I think this author has some crazy good stories to tell.
— Jul 17, 2014 11:15AM
Stephen
is 73% done
Just when I thought the story was turning to a "real" conflict and more sci-fi...jealous girls and romantic troubles emerge.
— Jul 17, 2014 09:59AM
Stephen
is 71% done
So, instead of an actual sci-fi dystopian adventure/romance we have an alternate timeline Mean Girls in a concentration camp school of the future???
— Jul 16, 2014 01:32PM
