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Dragging a bit. Ready for the action. Just not into the sister banter.
— Jul 12, 2014 07:01AM
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Debra
is on page 349 of 368
"fumble-tumbling down the steps". ????? STOP IT ALREADY!!!!
— Jul 13, 2014 01:03AM
Debra
is on page 337 of 368
"From the kitchen, a sound tumble-pranced.". What in the world does THAT mean??? Seriously, stop trying to be clever! It's really irritating!
— Jul 13, 2014 12:44AM
Debra
is on page 335 of 368
"Thoughts bouncy-bounced."
Uh...yeah? Isn't that rather childish sounding? Phrases like that just suck me right out of the story. I wish the author would quit trying to be clever and just tell the story already!
— Jul 13, 2014 12:37AM
Uh...yeah? Isn't that rather childish sounding? Phrases like that just suck me right out of the story. I wish the author would quit trying to be clever and just tell the story already!
Debra
is on page 11 of 368
(Technically the first page of text.) "Not so pretty in death, are you." Uh, "are you" is a question. So a punctuation error in the first line? Really??
— Jul 03, 2014 11:28AM
