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[1/2] Sleepless near the Pacific—hardly peaceful, roaring enough to wake and needle me like nettle—I beach-walked by a half-moon. This poem was with me and stopped being distant that night (from “The Ruins of Timoleague Abbey” by Sean O’Coileain):
I am gut-sad.
I am flirting
with the green waves,
wandering the sand,
feeding reflection
into the seaweed’s foam.
…
I am in my remembering.
— Mar 06, 2022 06:41PM
I am gut-sad.
I am flirting
with the green waves,
wandering the sand,
feeding reflection
into the seaweed’s foam.
…
I am in my remembering.
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from "The Owl-Court of Ifor Hael"
(Welsh, by Evan Evans, 1731–1733):
Where are the poets?
the bard and storied-harp?
or the generous lord,
with a cup of wine at his arm?
...
For all fame's
beating of shields
there are no ramparts here
jutting through this ivy,
just a moon-blue cry
from the thin, black branches.
And you thought Pound started Imagism.
— Apr 16, 2022 06:06AM
(Welsh, by Evan Evans, 1731–1733):
Where are the poets?
the bard and storied-harp?
or the generous lord,
with a cup of wine at his arm?
...
For all fame's
beating of shields
there are no ramparts here
jutting through this ivy,
just a moon-blue cry
from the thin, black branches.
And you thought Pound started Imagism.
Andrew
is starting
from "The Turn in the Road" (Welsh, from traditional verse, seventeenth century):
Past forty,
a man can carry
the flush
of a tree in leaf,
or shoulder a
quiver of speech.
He can laugh quietly
over his scars.
— Apr 10, 2022 08:44PM
Past forty,
a man can carry
the flush
of a tree in leaf,
or shoulder a
quiver of speech.
He can laugh quietly
over his scars.
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I am bent with weeping.
This blue dream
chucks the salt from me.
I remember
the walls god-bright
with the king’s theology
…
The saints are scattered now.
The high arch
is an ivy tangle.
The stink of fox
is the only swinging incense.
…
My face has earnt
the grim mask.
My heart a husk.
But my hand. My hand
reaches through this sour air
and touches
the splendid darkness
of my deliverer.
— Mar 06, 2022 06:47PM
I am bent with weeping.
This blue dream
chucks the salt from me.
I remember
the walls god-bright
with the king’s theology
…
The saints are scattered now.
The high arch
is an ivy tangle.
The stink of fox
is the only swinging incense.
…
My face has earnt
the grim mask.
My heart a husk.
But my hand. My hand
reaches through this sour air
and touches
the splendid darkness
of my deliverer.
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Mar 06, 2022 11:22PM
"gut-sad": brilliant
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