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Wordsworth
is 72% done
I have never read so much repetitive exposition. You REALLY don't need to repeatedly explain the relationships between your dog and your friend's pets, or how the vet came to live and work in town, or how you gradually took over the business from your former, retired, boss.
— Mar 07, 2022 06:15PM
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Wordsworth
is 95% done
I have never read so much repetitive exposition. I think there was not a single scene or setup in this book that did not get repeated, even down to the most mundane detail. And to learn everyone's backstory in act four of a "thriller" via long conversations??? Cut the length in half and make it four times as good.
— Mar 08, 2022 11:34PM
Wordsworth
is 72% done
I have never read so much repetitive exposition. I think there was not a single scene or setup in this book that did not get repeated, even down to the most mundane detail. And to learn everyone's backstory in act four of a "thriller" via long conversations??? Cut the length in half and make it four times as good.
— Mar 08, 2022 11:34PM
