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why tf are the chapter names so weird and have no connection to the chapter?
— Mar 12, 2022 05:18AM
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this is why i dnfed! the first ch was the only good one.
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Bhavya wrote: "this is why i dnfed! the first ch was the only good one."Fiona and Jane are like the same people with the same personalities with different names
Both of them don't have fathers
stuff doesn't make sense
Hershey ღ wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "this is why i dnfed! the first ch was the only good one."Fiona and Jane are like the same people with the same personalities with different names
Both of them don't have fathers
st..."
exactly, and the povs are written very weird. both should have been 1st person.
Bhavya wrote: "Hershey ღ wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "this is why i dnfed! the first ch was the only good one."Fiona and Jane are like the same people with the same personalities with different names
Both of them don..."
yeahh!
Jane's chapters are better
also whats up with the time span between the chapter😭
one minute they're 16 and the next, 22
Hershey ღ wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Hershey ღ wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "this is why i dnfed! the first ch was the only good one."Fiona and Jane are like the same people with the same personalities with different names
B..."
exactly, its annoying
