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Natalie
is 86% done
The book started very strong, but somehow lost tension. Lots of telling, not enough showing. Also the rulers are incompetent, you'd think they would have a spy network and better systems in place. All they do is just react to events.
Also I disliked the use of the word (revolution). It feels off, very overused and too cliche. Feels like the era when all YA books had to have a revolution in them (post hunger games).
— Mar 11, 2022 09:56AM
Also I disliked the use of the word (revolution). It feels off, very overused and too cliche. Feels like the era when all YA books had to have a revolution in them (post hunger games).
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Natalie
is 96% done
This book really leans into the (tell) side of writing. Lots of talk-no-jutsu too. Started pretty strong, the ending is so weak. Shame.
— Mar 14, 2022 09:13PM

