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Julia O'Malley
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It's so cringey, guys. The dialogue is insanely bad. The protagonist's attitude is annoying. And, like I said, the timeline is unrealistic. It's been literally three days, and the characters are all behaving like it has been more with the way they interact and think about each other and the situations. Just bad writing all around 😂 But I am curious to see how the ghost hauntings end up.
— Mar 20, 2022 06:27AM
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Julia O'Malley
is on page 227 of 304
Once again, timing doesn't make sense. I'm certainly no expert, and I wouldn't even know how to find an answer to this, but I don't believe that someone could drag a girl into the woods, carve her heart out, and escape in ten minutes. Yet, that is what we seem to be asked to believe here, because "ten minutes" was used as the frame of reference for calling the cops, and we aren't led to believe much more time passed
— Mar 21, 2022 04:29AM
Julia O'Malley
is on page 205 of 304
The dad, the dog, and Nona Amador are the only likeable characters.
— Mar 20, 2022 08:30PM
Julia O'Malley
is on page 101 of 304
None of the characters are believable. The dialogue is bad; they pretty much all sound like the same person. And the timeline also doesn't seem well thought out.
But, it goes very quickly! And it has been on my shelf a long time, so I'm going to finish it.
— Mar 19, 2022 05:47AM
But, it goes very quickly! And it has been on my shelf a long time, so I'm going to finish it.
Julia O'Malley
is on page 24 of 304
Was not expecting this to be a Snow White retelling, based on its description
— Mar 18, 2022 02:18PM
