Zofia > Status Update

I'm only at 12% percent but I'm struggling. I liked the blurb and the premise seems like my jam, but the execution is rather poor... The dialogues are unrealistic to a cringe level, there are tones of unnecessary fillers and lines which could - and should - be left out, such as descriptions of the character's each step and move in a scene and the 5 year old is portrayed in completely unrealistic way...