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Anino
is 22% done
This is truly an Urban Street novel... At this moment in time, it's OK, but the dialogue lacks a sense of realism. Do people actually talk this way?
— Jul 29, 2014 07:01PM
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Anino
is 40% done
Simply put, I am so annoyed with this book. The dialogue is irritating, the pillow talk is corny, and even more irritating is the serious amount of lag that has managed to drag this book down.
— Jul 29, 2014 08:56PM
