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Drea
Drea is 20% done
I'm so bored with this. First chapter is ALL exposition, no dialogue. No other characters. Chapter two has some dialogue but is mostly exposition too. I'm 20% in and the heroine was finally mentioned but hasn't put in an appearance. If this weren't short, and for a post, I'd have DNF it 10% ago
Jul 31, 2014 06:08AM
One Step Closer  (The DeLuca Brothers, #1)

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Drea
Drea is 91% done
Really? [SPOILER] He proposes and then goes down on her before she can answer?
Aug 02, 2014 08:00PM
One Step Closer  (The DeLuca Brothers, #1)


Drea
Drea is 68% done
This one is better, and it's not a flashback so that's good
Aug 02, 2014 07:42PM
One Step Closer  (The DeLuca Brothers, #1)


Drea
Drea is 47% done
The sex scene is a little too cheesy for my taste.
Aug 02, 2014 07:24PM
One Step Closer  (The DeLuca Brothers, #1)


Drea
Drea is 31% done
Oh god, a flashback
Jul 31, 2014 02:38PM
One Step Closer  (The DeLuca Brothers, #1)


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