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is 44% done
Riveting story, but someone really needs a proofreader. Two funny examples: "the body lay "prostate" on the ground" and Minnerva was described as a "gentile" woman rather than a "gentle" woman. Otherwise I'm really enjoying the story.
— Jul 31, 2014 12:41PM
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Barbara
is 44% done
Riveting story, but someone rally needs a proofreader. Two funny examples: "the body lay "prostate" on the ground" and Minnerva was described as a "gentile" woman rather than a "gentle" woman. Otherwise I'm really enjoying the story.
— Jul 31, 2014 12:14PM
