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Aug 06, 2014 11:20AM
If it's wrong to love you

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Gemma is on page 42 of 355
The story is engaging enough but I have serious issues with the punctuation in this book: suspension point or ellipsis is JUST three dots, not 10, and someone should explain the writer the correct use of Saxon genitive as she dropped the apostrophe everywhere! Question: was it written in English by a Spanish speaker or is it a translation? In any case, I think it needs serious editing.
Aug 04, 2014 12:16PM
If it's wrong to love you


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