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Lisa Mandina
is on page 43 of 240
Really having trouble staying interested in this.
— Apr 08, 2022 07:46PM
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Lisa Mandina
is on page 97 of 240
Ok. Story is at least interesting enough. Still have issues with writing.
— Apr 09, 2022 03:17PM
Lisa Mandina
is on page 59 of 240
Hmm, Al’s chapter seems out of the timeline. And why the hell are they making people sleep on the ground?
— Apr 09, 2022 11:39AM
Lisa Mandina
is on page 24 of 240
So I'm having trouble getting into this one so far. It has a lot of telling instead of showing, and some other issues that don't make it flow easily for me. However, I'm going to keep trying and hope that as it gets more into the main story and adventure that I get sucked in.
— Apr 08, 2022 10:23AM
