Rachel Brown’s Reviews > Rider > Status Update

I thought I'd like this. It's about a girl who rides an alien pterodactyl!

I gave up due to either an inexplicably avant-garde style, or a total lack of editing/proofing. Capitalization, punctuation, and formatting are wrong, missing, and/or inconsistent. I is sometimes capitalized, sometimes not. Etc.

I'm baffled by this. The same author's (good) urban fantasies (as J. Damask) don't have this problem.