slp’s Reviews > The Vela: Salvation > Status Update

I have to agree with critiques about the sophistication of writing (repetition and explanation that don't expand or drive things forward) and depth of characters and plot. My take is the split between the sides of the wormhole doesn't work, in part because each (but especially Niko) is limited by obsession with the other--not that they aren't integral to each other but the scope of thinking seems narrow. missed opps.