BookFiend’s Reviews > Captured by the Magi > Status Update
BookFiend
is 72% done
I am still pretty lost by the basic plotting of the story. If you are in the bottom of the pack, you get sent home. Why is everyone so worried about Wyatt when he could easily just get sent home if he doesn't want to be there? They say it's bc they threatened him with Jesse, except the last he saw, she was thrown off a cliff. It just doesn't make sense. Also, why would the dad toss her in like this to get him out?
— May 01, 2022 10:36AM
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BookFiend
is 85% done
Okay, this really makes no sense. Maverick is in there and was able to find both twins with no problem. He could have just told Wyatt to tank the thing and it would have been done. Feels like a pretty big plot hole.
— May 01, 2022 10:55AM
