Kari’s Reviews > Danegeld > Status Update
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is 13% done
The editing leaves something to be desired. Weird punctuation. Our hero's multiple spellings of his name (Karn, Kara, Kam). Odd POV breaks without notice. BUT, might be version of Kindle file. Story is decent, and easy to read.
— Aug 31, 2014 11:14AM
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