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Mel
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So, this book does something I hate. When it changed PoV it then goes over the same exact scene with the same dialogue with the addition of the other person's thoughts. It's so repetitive and it's a waste of space and really lazy
— May 11, 2022 06:37AM
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Mel
is 60% done
She shaves "every orafice". Uhm, ma'am, I don't think you understand what that word really means. Unless you're shaving your ears and eyes and ::shudder:: urethra, too
— May 11, 2022 07:25AM
Mel
is 21% done
Let's add "would of" to that list of egregious grammatical errors
— May 11, 2022 06:12AM
