Ryan’s Reviews > City of Pearl > Status Update
Ryan
is 44% done
This is really good, but there's a jerkiness to the story partially due to the multiple pov changes that makes it too easy to put down for my liking.
— May 22, 2022 07:49PM
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Ryan
is 98% done
“There’s never been an adult baptism here before.”
“I explained that the water cleanses the human’s soul. The bezeri wanted to know if the soul-dirt that was washed off would pollute their environment.”
— May 23, 2022 11:08AM
“I explained that the water cleanses the human’s soul. The bezeri wanted to know if the soul-dirt that was washed off would pollute their environment.”
Ryan
is 55% done
"It was arrogance rather than cruelty that had motivated the gethes, but that was the cause of most brutal acts. Hiding behind lack of intent was a human excuse."
— May 23, 2022 03:51AM
