kimberly_rose’s Reviews > Logan's Choice > Status Update

Sigh, I am done. There was so much good here, plenty of themes I love, such as humiliation, self-esteem struggles, force and submission and dominance, but it was just all so twisted around. The biggest killer was the cock-sure perfection of Daddy Ian. Fuck him. 5 stars for idea and some dark themes and tense scenes, 1 star for development.

O mah gawd, now Ian is gonna discipline the defiant little wife cuz he knows better, is seeing her best interests at hear, and this silly, immature rebellion needs to be beat out of her? Dear lord, please make Logan hate Ian after this. Sweet Jesus, if he thinks, "Yes, Ian was right and protecting me from myself," I will be ENRAGED.

Yay! Go Logan, go! Fight back! Kick Ian in the nuts! You do know yourself better than those perfect fucking wolves.

Well, at least Logan wonders if he's being manipulated. He acknowledges he is under some 'compulsion.' But I hate how he keeps going back to his much he loves Ian. I hate how the wolves are portrayed as perfect. They're no better than Logan's father, manipulating Logan for their own ends, under the guise of it's for the best of all.

He would have killed him if Logan didn't join them?! My gods, so much mind-fuckery presented as 'he just needs to learn to accept himself and the arrogant assholes who all seemingly know him better than he knows himself' going on in this story and 'new' Logan is expected to happily fall in love... and he seems to be doing just that! Nothing kills my interest in a story like insensible, unacknowledged ludicrous-y.

I'm starting to skim. Epic fail on the like factor, I hate Ian and his unchecked arrogance, I'm annoyed by Logan and his brainless new personality....

Seeing the way Nicky is treated by Marco is not inspiring me with any confidence that this story will continue to be liked by me. Nicky is treated and viewed like a brainless sex object, reminiscent of a 1950s housewife, patronized by her husband. And he plays the role happily.

It's definitely rape, all the way and of many types, but the knotting! *faints* okay! I acknowledge my fantastical depravity! but now, now I want Logan's psyche to fuck him up. And Ian. Man, I want to fuck him up.

Damn, I hope Logan does not do what Ian assumes he'll do in the end. I want Logan to HATE Ian after they have this sex. Take that and see what you'll feel, Ian! Maybe try and win his affections with a little humble work?

Seriously, a few minutes ago, Logan's "greatest fear" was being ass-raped by this guy, the same guy who he now is desperate to have ram him? So the bite changes his psychology? No, seriously, why isn't he having serious cognitive dissonance?