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Crazypetlady
Crazypetlady is on page 73 of 254
Way too many short chapters and confusing characters.
May 31, 2022 02:04PM
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Crazypetlady
Crazypetlady is on page 138 of 254
Another new chapter and another new character. And is the h really so dumb that she doesn't know that she was drinking Long Island Ice Tea? I thought that the very first time they mentioned ice tea. The author has made this book really hard to like.
May 31, 2022 06:58PM
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Crazypetlady
Crazypetlady is on page 118 of 254
In a previous chapter, we added racism. In this chapter, we have religion. This author is trying too hard to hit all the genre's. And it's not a cozy mystery, it's slow and poorly edited.
May 31, 2022 06:09PM
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Crazypetlady
Crazypetlady is on page 44 of 254
Page 44 and chapter 8 and the h treats her husband terrible. This woman is making it really hard to like her.
May 31, 2022 08:47AM
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Crazypetlady
Crazypetlady is on page 25 of 254
Page 25, chapter 5 and nothing has happened. Is this book trying to bore readers to death? And the main h is a bit dumb and bitchy. She's already told another character that she's worthy of love because she's not fat...lovely.
May 31, 2022 08:36AM
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Crazypetlady
Crazypetlady is on page 13 of 254
Page 13 and a new chapter. I know that this is the first book in a series, hopefully the author figures this habit out and resolves it soon.
May 31, 2022 07:18AM
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Crazypetlady
Crazypetlady is on page 6 of 254
There are 39 chapters in this book and chapter one was about 4 pages. That's just bad editing.
May 31, 2022 06:56AM
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