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Everytime these guys "giggle" I'm immediately thrown out of the story and left pondering that particular word choice. I suppose college juniors do giggle but it makes them seem younger than they are.
Aside from that I'm enjoying the story. It isn't perfect but I at least want to know what ends up happening so, yeah.
— Jun 04, 2022 09:34PM
Aside from that I'm enjoying the story. It isn't perfect but I at least want to know what ends up happening so, yeah.
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Jun 04, 2022 09:43PM
There's something about words like giggle and giddy that really do age down characters for me
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I find it hard to read books that use the word “giggle” especially when it’s men. It makes me think of kids not men and almost always takes me out of the story.
@Candy @Megan It's definitely a little strange. It doesn't help that these characters act younger than their age, as well.
