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If I were one of the characters in the book, I would have been Tynan, Ashton's wolfhound. What I would've done was forcefully make myself go onto the ship that Ashton, his father, and mother had taken. Tynan got left alone on their home planet, and I think the story would be more interesting if the wolfhound stayed on board the vessel. It might've made the character's struggles more difficult or helpful.
— Sep 15, 2014 09:38AM
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Isabel
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My book's POV is in third person. I know which character it's focusing on because of how it's written, it might say the name of the character, the gender, the thoughts, etc. etc.
— Sep 26, 2014 09:33AM
Isabel
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Ash's mom learned a lesson in this book from Ash using "mindtouch" on an off worlder. His mom now knows not to be so ignorant and "too forgiving" with an off worlder.
— Sep 25, 2014 09:39AM
Isabel
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If the author made Captain Forseth a woman, I think the plot would change. I don't think there would be any mind touch, I think there would just be a quick inspection of Ash's ship and ten they would head out. I think Captain Forseth as a man kind of has a bigish type of role in this book. Well some things DID go down with Ash's mother and Captian Forseth, which I'm not going to mention... *gags*
— Sep 24, 2014 09:33AM
Isabel
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If I had to add music to my book, I would pick the song The Empty World - Dark Post Apocalyptic Piano by Walid Feghali. I think it fits the depression and death parts in my book well. It's a great song, 10 outta 10 would recommend it again. It's a good orchestral piece to listen to while studying.
— Sep 23, 2014 09:18AM
Isabel
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In this book from about page 95-102, I was wandering away from the text to something else. This is because this part of the book started to get kind of boring for me to read as it was kind of bland and a little bit itself wandered off from the original plot of this book. I hope it gets better... I really do.
— Sep 22, 2014 09:38AM
Isabel
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I think the plot of my book is believable. It has o do with the future and includes people/beings from other planets like Delian. The actual detailed plot of this book is actually pretty interesting too. So I think it's believable for a furturistic, scifi, fantasy, type of book.
— Sep 19, 2014 09:37AM
Isabel
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In Wolf Dawn, I connect with Ashton, the main character. Ashton is very curious and kinda of nosy, which I'm like. He also keeps secrets from others, even family. I like to keep things to myself, there's plenty of thins I know that others don't.
— Sep 18, 2014 09:40AM
Isabel
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I have but yet haven't been able to predict what happens in the book. The parts that I can't predict is because sometimes the author makes the book take a big turn, or go into something you wouldn't expect to happen. I've been able to predict something because I believe I'm pretty good at analysis with certain things; even some friends I know told me this.
— Sep 05, 2014 09:37AM
