A. Cook’s Reviews > The Tempering > Status Update

A really good read and it delivered more than I expected. Biggest issue is the lack of proofreading and word usage. Quick example of this is the use of to, too, and two. The author would write ‘to people’ when ‘two’ is required or use the word barley instead or barely. Other than this it pretty good and the main characters are really believable. Mackenzie is a strong female lead, Margaret the appropriate villain