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Belinda
Belinda is 60% done
IT has some really good moments. But too much descriptive information on the main characters inner feelings eg. "his inner clock was already attuned to returning to Mrs g". Also everyone is either delightfully nice and supportive, (the vast majority), or the exact opposite. And all the nice people have the same "voices". All say the same things, think the same things.
Jun 09, 2022 07:56PM
Have You Seen Luis Velez?

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