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Vicii is 13% done
Just read the first two chapters and I'm not really happy with the book. The pacing is just wrong, it begins with the lad deciding he needs to find out who his family are so needs to go on a journey. He expects his aunty to talk him out of it but she basically says"go on then" and the next second he's been walking for days and then conveniently happens upon someone to show him the way to go...
Sep 21, 2014 01:23PM
The Sword of Light (The Veredor Chronicles, #1)

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