Amanda’s Reviews > Mirror's Hope > Status Update

Wow, that rape scene was graphic...

Aside from some editing gaffes (eg. Duplications of character description, minor grammatical errors), overall the story flows well so far. I am a little disturbed by how much of a beating poor Mirena is taking, and she really is an unfortunate, helpless character up to this point so far. She also is not in good control of her emotions, but I guess her character is supposed to be very young.

The story picked up a bit around the 10% Mark and it's getting more interesting. I feel somewhat sorry for Mirena. She's a very self-deprecating character.