Michaela > Status Update

At 24 pages I have a few thoughts. First, the title is bad and the description is worse. I wasn’t thrilled by the concept of this book but was willing to give it a try. So far what I’ve noticed is that this book feels like a middle draft, not a final draft. It’s not nicely polished. The author tells us everything rather than showing us and there is no emotion. No connection to the characters.