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So. much. system. exposition. The first 4 chapters are basically dedicated to it, with the first chapter being used to establish the characters and their... deep... friendship. We've finally ventured to another world to experiment with these new skills and instead... the MC has collected soil samples and a talking field mouse that exclusively talks in double words.
Great-great. This-this should be fun-fun.
— Jun 25, 2022 01:19AM
Great-great. This-this should be fun-fun.
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I'm all over the place with what I'm listening in the gym lately... Hearing that this was a progression fantasy with equal parts sci-fi, I decided to pick this up on a whim. Been investing in too much grim dark fantasy lately. The audiobook narration is great (I'm in love with Jessica Threet).
Interesting concepts but awful execution so far. The dialogue is heavily expositional that the characters don't feel real.
— Jun 24, 2022 04:22AM
Interesting concepts but awful execution so far. The dialogue is heavily expositional that the characters don't feel real.