Adele Bsur’s Reviews > The Island of Missing Trees > Status Update
Adele Bsur
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Piqued my interest at first, but it's practically gone now.
The writing has grown tiring, with flowery descriptions and imagery that started off wonderful and magical, but is stagnant now.
What use is it having a beautiful way of words when it adds nothing to the story? I am tired of the author filling pages with phrases that I eventually forget, where is the direction? Where is the progression?
— Jun 28, 2022 07:53AM
The writing has grown tiring, with flowery descriptions and imagery that started off wonderful and magical, but is stagnant now.
What use is it having a beautiful way of words when it adds nothing to the story? I am tired of the author filling pages with phrases that I eventually forget, where is the direction? Where is the progression?
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