Kylie’s Reviews > Fates Hands > Status Update
Kylie
is 30% done
DNF - I couldn’t get past the writing errors ☹️ if an editor went through it and cleaned it up the bones of the story are great.
— Jun 30, 2022 07:07AM
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Kylie’s Previous Updates
Kylie
is 30% done
Good plot
Major grammatical and punctuation errors
Minor inconsistencies in the story lines and character details
— Jan 21, 2022 05:02PM
Major grammatical and punctuation errors
Minor inconsistencies in the story lines and character details
