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wow, 5 minutes in and i am really disliking this (male) narrator. like, a lot. why so aggressive, dude? yeah, the character is irritable right now, but the narrator is overplaying it. also, annoying accent.
Jun 30, 2022 11:57PM
The Exiled Fleet (The Divide, #2)

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ok it’s been 14 minutes and i can’t take the sarcasm and aggression in the narration. maybe inject some of that when the characters speak, but leave it out of the non-dialog portions. please.
Jul 01, 2022 12:05AM
The Exiled Fleet (The Divide, #2)


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