Beth’s Reviews > Empire of Desire > Status Update

Okay for starters the writing so far flows and the pace is good. I’m at 37% and Nate inquired what urges Gwen had. Sexual, okay I’m interested now. When she keeps going and he keeps asking I know where this is going. Boom! When Nate says you’re going to show me I was like… I’m reading everyone leave me alone I’m busy for the rest of the night. Ch. 16 don’t let me down please!!!