The Queen Katz’s Reviews > A Mate's Bite > Status Update
The Queen Katz
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Couple of discrepancies that are buggin me
* On page 70 - Karla is in yoga pants and t-shirts yet on page 72 she suddenly is worried there are stains on her track pants
* Page 79 she slams her bedroom door closed - yet very next paragraph she yells at her sister than threw the door shut….it was already shut!
— Jul 08, 2022 04:02PM
* On page 70 - Karla is in yoga pants and t-shirts yet on page 72 she suddenly is worried there are stains on her track pants
* Page 79 she slams her bedroom door closed - yet very next paragraph she yells at her sister than threw the door shut….it was already shut!
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