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Amanda
Amanda is 10% done
I feel like A LOT of this should have been edited out. So far nothing is happening except the MC's inner monologue and rambling explanations of how she met every character introduced in the book. And there are 679 pages in this book. Let's hope something happens soon! I do like character-driven books, but a little action would be nice.
Oct 11, 2014 07:13PM
Awakening Foster Kelly

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Amanda
Amanda is 37% done
We're finally getting somewhere. Some parts of this book are good but there are too many scenes that are long daydreams/flashbacks that really add nothing to the story or characters.
Oct 13, 2014 04:16PM
Awakening Foster Kelly


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