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Jade Archer
is 80% done
Really enjoying the story, but having a little trouble with the speed of Dane and Colin's budding relationship...it's okay, but feels a little forced and fast.
— Feb 20, 2011 07:01PM
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Jade Archer
is 57% done
These characters feel very real to me. It's really the story of four men and two relationships...different, but I like how it's been done so far.
— Feb 20, 2011 05:20PM
Jade Archer
is 20% done
Wow! This is a good book. I mean really good book! I'm so impressed with the writing so far. The dialogue is particularly well done IMO and characters are leaping right off the page at me. Okay...going to say I'm a little...mmm...intrigued that we haven't met the second love interest yet...interesting.
— Feb 20, 2011 05:11AM
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Feb 20, 2011 07:41PM
i don't like reading books where one of the guys is named Dane ... i still will but i always have to change it in my head to something else
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LOL...Yeah, I can see can see how it would be very weird. :D
It does. Luckily not too many authors use it and if they do it's a minor character so it's easy to avoid
