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"Inside, she was still dry and unyielding." Um, ouch? This is supposed to be erotic??
— Oct 18, 2014 02:03PM
Onyx
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First paragraph: "He had never liked LA." I'm sorry, but people hating on los angeles just makes me laugh. the place is literally paradise. "How did people think with all that sunshine?" tehe.
— Oct 18, 2014 02:01PM