Marina’s Reviews > Wreck of the Frost Finch > Status Update

Well, that was disappointing; last 2 ch sucked; ch 7 over-dramatized & unlikely to happen that way (crashing into windscreen, not stabbing captain etc); not showing many characteristics -> characters appear rather flat; starting different stories but simply dropping them along the way; one would think someone who lived for so long yet had such a motivation to learn/discover would be wiser..

doubt that (fast) motions like that are possible; dialogues at the end don't make enough sense

:)

mixture of already existing cultures and names etc. -> not much originality, don't like it; sudden jumps from one moment to another, not describing what happens in between & not bridging elegantly; using many culture specific words without describing what they mean (assuming they are known) -> images would be helpful

seem to like writing style so far