T.A. Burke’s Reviews > Something Wicked > Status Update

This was a really, really good story. But about halfway in, the author began using cutesy humor, such as:

“Ahhh!” Piers smacked into a hedge. Ow. That would leave a mark. He crawled out of his vegetation prison, picking bits of leaves from his hair. Getting the last word in, a branch promptly smacked him in the face.

I'll finish reading, but it's not my type of humor.